Posted by: theresegilardi | July 1, 2011

Cupid’s in The House

Happy Sunday! The following six sentences are from “Matching Wits With Venus”, my recently released paranormal romance about a Hollywood matchmaker and the Roman god Cupid. As you can see, this is NOT your mother’s greeting card cut-out, cardboard Cupid.

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY:

“Oh, no, this one’s wearing the uniform,” Jennie groaned as she stared out the window, to the street in front of “Happily Ever After by Amelia.” “Although I have to admit, he is kind of cute.”

Amelia looked up from her computer, where she’d been busy creating an even more refined personality profile. A tall, perfectly proportioned man in jeans, a white-button down shirt, and a dark sports coat was striding along the pavement. Amelia noticed how the man’s sun-kissed hair fell to one side. She reached up and touched her own unruly curls.

For those who are celebrating, may you have a Happy Independence Day. For more six Sunday sentences, please visit: http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/

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Responses

  1. Love the way she savored his appearance! He certainly caught her eye.

  2. What a great idea for a romance! Clever, and great snippet, too!

  3. Ha! I was expecting a cop or a soldier. Surprising snip!!

  4. Fantastic six, and I love the idea of the story.

  5. Beautifully written six! Thank you very much.

  6. Love how after seeing his hair she touches hers

  7. Having her touch her hair was a wonderful detail! šŸ™‚

    ~Xakara
    Dawn’s Early Light 6SS


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